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Hey Now Sweetheart

hey now sweetheart
sing me a song
anything
with that voice of yours
I'd love to hear
anything

hey now sweetheart
make me a valentine
anything
with those hands of yours
I'd love to have
anything

hey now sweetheart
blow me a kiss
anything
with those lips of yours
I'd love to feel
anything

hey now sweetheart
look at a girl
anyone
with those eyes of yours
you'd love to see
anyone

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  • rhetorica gold member
    January 4, 2009

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    Nice conceit here,I guess this is about false flattery,it seems you can see right through it
    i like how you have arranged this,quite charming but a little different from your usual

    well done

    rhet

    • cee
      January 4, 2009
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      Thank you, its about someone who has everything but has no idea what to do with it so he's like a puppet