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Last night, when I
was sleeping, dreaming, I felt happy. In my dream, I was in a place where I love so much. Theirs' and my voice were in harmony, combined. I was over-joyed that that I felt I was in the "Paradies of God". But that feeling came to an end because of a Truth. As we sang through the notes, my voice sounded sad. "The man is right", I said, "I am worst and I will be worst, forever". The man said the words that I scared of, scared of the truth it contains. "Even if your voice gets higher, it gets weaker and weaker. Like fadding away", the man said. Just as he said that, I saw myself, scared half to death. Scared of singing. I saw my eyes and the "Paradies of God" faded, as well as my voice did. I woke up, knowing that I was dreaming. But when the dream ended, my voice didn't sing as well as myself did. I always remembered that Night because, after the dream happened, I cried. |
Author notes
I had a dream just as the poem says. The poem really tells all of what had happened. I like to sing in high notes, somtimes. and i'm trying to sing in high notes but i don't get it often. But, i didn't cried. I just woke up with the man's word echoed in my head; and with the Truth stabbing heart. Oh well, that's what life is, i guess. Lol XD
How does truth scares you?
Comments
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I like it a lot. It's like a realistic poem. People can relate to, such as me. Dreams are like a fantasy 3d world where we can forget our troubles, but it's fantasy. And that's why one of my usernames on a website is dreamsrfantasy.
My favorite stanza is:
"As we sang
through the notes,
my voice sounded
sad."
But I have a suggestion for this:
"The man said the words
that I scared of,
scared of
the truth it contains."
To:
"The man said the words
That I was scared of,
I was scared of
The truth it contains."
I hope this is useful =]
-Hope.
