Blossom into the grace of the divine
Raise tall, sing loud, and let your soul guide into the future
Triumph into perplexity, Charge into greatness
You are a flower
Glorious in it's entity!
Spread rivers of gold through cracks of implications
You are an individual. A significance.
Don't be shameful for your existence.
Don't waste it by being obstinate
Don't kill it being indolent
You should rejoice for what you have experienced
Not weep for what you haven't
Force yourself to love what remains
Force yourself not to hate what doesn't
Cherish gratuity, Encourage sincerity
Be what you want, but love who you are
Blossom into the grace of the divine
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After reading much of your poetry, i realize in this site you have quite a distinct style. Your poetry's tone is powerful, strong and declarative. As if each poem was written to be declaimed, which works. The word choice, the phrasing and even the placement of the punctuation marks render this poem its subtle power. This reminds me of one of your other poem, and i think it also had to do with a flower. I like how individuality here is praised, but not idealized. You point out that pain is there and the road is hard, but its not to think we are weak or that we cannot go on, for as we are, we are 'glorious in its entity." You also point out how being better and being changing isn't bad and isn't impossible, but first we have to love who we are. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you for the comment. I've also noticed the beginning of a distinctive style in my poetry. This poem was inspired by the poem you are referring to on here "Her Entity". Thank you again for the read.
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I re-read "her entity." yes, that was the poem that came to mind. I see now why they are similar.
-iphios
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This is so good,it`s what a lot of people including myself need to hear,no point in being miserable or dwelling on the past,you are a naturally intelligent person,its obvious in your work,
favorite line,
spread rivers of gold through cracks of implications
great writing kitten
rhet
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Thank you.
And Thank you for the comment
There is always beauty to be found in this life, no matter the size, it's there.
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