Swirling around in vortexes of numbness
Frolicking through fields of radiance
Revealing unknown depths of relevance
Claiming mountains of elegant delicacy
Mispronouncing sonnets of substance
Derailing into abysmal perpetuation
Announce stature, reconcile confrontations
Indulge in placid mutilations of nonesense
Defend that of which has bestowed progression
Sneer at ignorance, sink into anarchy
Alter proclamations of insignificance
Smother in comprehension, void deliverance
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It`s a poem of two halves,the first two stanzas point out the general ignorance of humanity,the next two tell us your thoughts on how we should act in order to progress as a race,i`m beginning to realise that one or two people who read your poetry are under the impression that its pretentious and false,that it comes from a thesaurus rather than your brain,they have entirely underestimated your intellect and anyone who has the nerve to say that this type of writing isn`t poetry can only be shallow,spineless and self-righteous,the fact that it has come from a young woman has lead to false and sexist assumptions...thats only my humble opinion of course,although in this instance i`m sure that i`m right
I embrace your style kitten,you deserve a lot more credit than you get
rhet
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Thank you very much. I would agree that you are completely right. I'm glad you can embrace my style like I have.
-Kitten
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