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Disconserted

It is my fault,
I know,
When I gave out the address
Written carefully.
When the people came
I should not have been surprised,
But I was
To see so many
Treating my sacred place
Like another party.

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  • Saturday Mar
    January 14, 2009
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    Nice Colin.
    But where's the party I was not invited to?
    -S


    • Colin Night
      January 14, 2009
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      Whoops, sorry about that. It wasn't great without you. Thanks for the read,
      -Colin