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Bad Timing

What I thought was important
ended up irrevelent,
What I thought was silly
was on the test,
My favorite jeans
have a hole in the knee,
My least favorite shirt
is the only one clean,
The boy who liked me
stopped taking my calls,
The one that annoys me
is always online,
I read a book
but can't remember the plot,
I wrote an essay
that was due in a month,
Things are getting jumbled,
when I need them straight.

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  • X-haydenx-xnochio-X
    January 15, 2009
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    hmmmmmmmmmmm

    i liked it till it got to" calls"
    then it kinda died out
    but before then, you had me hooked


    • Saturday Mar
      January 16, 2009
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      Yeah I kindof ran out of ideas and I coundn't think of any other way to end it... I need to edit it.
      Thanks
      -S