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My Sweet But Painful Love

Today, I want to forget all
about you:
on how you feel
how you talk
and how you live

Today, I want to be free
from your idiotic love for me


Today, I don't want to hear
anymore of your fake words
that grabs my heart.


Today, I want to talk to you
and ask you if you, truly, love me.


Today, I want you to know
what love, deeply, means.


Today, I want us to forget
about this,






All about us being together.



Today, I'll say "good-bye"




And I will be free,
crying,
for a new start.

Author notes

PEOPLE!!!! I HAVE ENOUGH OF LOVE RELATIONSHIP!!!!! *sighs*
PLZZ...... can someone give me an advice on how to break up with someone? I REALLY REALLy need to break up with my stupid bf!!!!! PLZZZZZ..... give me light!!!!

Don't you just hate love, somtimes?

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Comments

  • Hanah gold member
    January 16, 2009
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    I like your poem .Your feelings seem to be mixed together .Love ,hate,pain,sadness .It's realistic,original ,but I'm sorry for not being able to give an advice.I've never been in love with somebody .Maybe you should ask the question Do I love him? or Does he really love me ?
    ~feb~

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    January 15, 2009

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    I don't know.

    I don't like being in love when the other person doesn't love me back. I don't like being in love if they are a long ways away and I can't see them. I think you did a great job on this. I like the format. It speaks from your heart.