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Two Words

There's a way to say
I'm sorry
there's a time to
apologize
Somehow
these go past you
like people
you don't see
I hate fights
but
to be honest
you hurt me
hurt
and I am ready
I want
to be your friend
again
but without
those words
we can't
I won't
forgive
because if you
don't understand
why
you need to say
those words
you don't understand
what's wrong
you don't understand
me

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Comments

  • ketchup4all
    January 23, 2009

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    Dang, this is packed with emotion!
    Just reading this, I feel like I can get a pretty solid glimpse of you! Keep up the good work!


  • The Distant Unknown silver member
    January 16, 2009

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    I Understand

    I completely understand where you are coming from there are just people you want to be friend with but you can't forget the hurt well written my favorite stanza was:
    "you need to say
    those words
    you don't understand
    what's wrong
    you don't understand
    me "
    Distant Unknown