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Your Boyfriend

You mean something
to her
which should mean
something
to me
And it does
to a point
to a line
drawn in red
Which I guess
you don't see
Now I'm done
making up
that you're
important
to me
We're past
that
I think
Becuase
of what you've
done.

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  • The Distant Unknown silver member
    January 18, 2009

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    Nice

    Firstly these seems to be a very heartfelt write so it already has caught my admiration. I sense there are many variances in this poem like its a thought process. I found it very interesting I'm not sure I interpreted it right but keep writing I enjoy reading your writes

    Take Care
    Distant Unknown


    • Saturday Mar
      January 18, 2009
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      Thanks it took me a couple tries to write this and have it sound the way I wanted to.
      Thank you so much for reading
      -S