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Farewell, my heart to better days Farewell my lover gone Found a way to escape your pain… Your final damage done And farewell, my heart To cheap blue skies As the color fades From out your eyes As we draw in large Collective sighs And begin to question The unanswered whys Farewell, my heart To pale lips To all those quiet moments I never knew I’d miss To the touch of your smile I’ll never again feel And to the senses I’ve lost To believe This is real |
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Woah...
Are you sure you're not a professional? You seem to be one. But i'm kinda confuse....are you saying good-bye or is the poem in a scene in love? Confusing.....argh!!!
Anyways, you're a professional not just a poet!!!Just kidding!!!! =D
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.
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wow..I love this..man your good..Great job!!
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