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Lots of or Lack of Snow

It's all white
where the fence
was
Now it's gone
and the snow's
there
It's all black
where the snow
was
Now the buses
run
Now I go
out
Where the snow
was
now it's
ice
slush
I'll be there.

Author notes

Hmm I'm feeling wierd... and part of my balcony blew off...

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Comments


  • Colin Night
    February 1, 2009

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    I really like this, Mar. Really, really, REALLY like this. I love the simpleness of it, but it's really beautiful. It captures the movement of time and things changing.
    Really, really good Mar
    -Colin