Hush
That sweet mouth
I think You've really
Said enough
Why
So much flattery
Do you not think
You've made yourself
Clear
I'll sing you a lullaby
To close those hazel eyes
I'll sing you a lullaby
You'll know you are enough
I'll sing to you this
Close your sweet words
Sweet
You are too sweet
Hush, I want
You to be silent
Hush, sweet boy
And I'll sing to you
Author notes
I hate it when he tries to sweet talk me, like he thinks I'm not even aware of how he feels. Don't overdo it to the girls, you guys. It's kind of pathetic.
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To the point.
Many guys have different reasons for sweet talking girls. Some want something. Others just want to make a girl feel special. Some do it out of habit. What can I say. Some of us are pathetic. I still say it's his loss.
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thanks brian! it IS his loss
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Yup!
Some guys are like that.
By reading your poem, i think the guy is getting on your nreves or he's very very anoying!!!
I like how you described him in your point of view. It lets the reader know how much you don't like the boy. Lol....
Anyways, AWESOME poem!!!
language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 3, form: 3.
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the guy was really getting on my nerves at that point with his non-stop sweet talk. but now he won't talk to me....i guess he got the point but not the way i wanted him to. oh well. it happens. thanks for reading!
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