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The Intersection of Life.

Not sure what to choose
Right,
Left,
Or in front of you.
Picking the path
To walk on,
Is the hardest choice
You have to do.
The right path
Is a never-ending road,
Choosing the left
Could be anything.
The path in front of you
Will be your worst choice yet,
If you have been only thinking of death.
Choose the path you want
But think before you go.
If you choose the wrong road
It will be the last we see of you.
So choose the right path,
As you stand on The Intersection of Life.

Author notes

While writing this poem, I was in the deepest depression of my life.

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  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    January 30, 2009

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    I accidently clicked on a feature called first impressions which opened up windows for 16 different poems. It says it shows me the first bit of a poem to leave a comment for. I would have preferred to read the entire poem before I commented. I'm behind on replies and returning comments so I don't have time to do that, especially for 16 poems. However I don't ever click on a poem and not leave a comment unless there have been extenuating circumstances. Those are extrememly rare. I noticed a typo in your categories, Deateh of course being Death. Keep writing and enjoy the site.