Hey,
do u miss those days
when our eyes would meet?
those days when we would
laugh at each other?
those days when we would
go out 2 da park n
ride da swings?
those days when we would
buy ice-creams n I would
throw mine on ur face?
those days when we would
text each other all night?
those days when we wouldn't
do our homework and I
would piggy-back ride on
ur back?
those days when u would pick
me up and throw me 2 da
lake?
those days when u would
hug me when I cry 4 no reason?
those days when u would say
"I'll stay by ur side" and then
I would blush and u would laugh
like a hyenah?
those days when we would sneek out
of our house n skip stones
on da lake?
and
those days when we
were n love?
Ya, I miss those days.
Author notes
When the poem says something like this "ur not my dad" instead of "you're not my dad". I changed "you're" to "ur" because so the poem would sound and look like it was wrote by someone whose young or a teenager! XD
I just wrote this when i saw and listen to a song. I didn't copy all the lyrics. I just thought of some stupid love things. This poem is like about two teenagers (boy and a girl) in love.
Hope u like it! =D
Do u remember ur own precious memories wih someone?
Comments
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hey big c
yeah you did manage to conjure the nostalgia of missing the innocence of a teen relatshonship. the text style and mispellings work to make it more authentic. U the bomb.
dave -
Sweet and Innocent
I enjoyed reading this poem just for what it was, sweet, "Puppy Love," and so innocent. It brought back memories of when I was a child. I liked the style in which it was written and everything about it.
Birdie
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 3.
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