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Hi
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Author notes
I know i just wasted like a minute or less of ur life!!! lol...
But read the poem again.
If u have a good eye, u can see and feel that the poem says a lot of things.
Saying good-bye to a friend.
Saying farewell to a deadlove one
Smiling at ur friend and waving goodbye and seeing each other tomorrow.
And more...
So, maybe u ddn't see that.
lol....XD
What do you say about this poem?
Comments
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Really nice poem! I love it! it's brilliant in its simplicity. One of my friends wrote a poem:
Silence

language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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This shows brilliant insight. It's one of your best yet. The first stanza is my favorite. But it's so hard to choose, you know! I love the entire thing. It shows just intellegience and humor....great job once again.
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