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Bye.


Author notes

I know i just wasted like a minute or less of ur life!!! lol...
But read the poem again.
If u have a good eye, u can see and feel that the poem says a lot of things.
Saying good-bye to a friend.
Saying farewell to a deadlove one
Smiling at ur friend and waving goodbye and seeing each other tomorrow.

And more...

So, maybe u ddn't see that.
lol....XD

What do you say about this poem?

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Comments


  • maemoce
    February 10, 2009

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    Really nice poem! I love it! it's brilliant in its simplicity. One of my friends wrote a poem:
    Silence



    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.


  • Lake Absence
    February 4, 2009

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    This shows brilliant insight. It's one of your best yet. The first stanza is my favorite. But it's so hard to choose, you know! I love the entire thing. It shows just intellegience and humor....great job once again.

    LOL