You hurt me
Maybe you didn't mean to
But you did
Now you're free
You don't have to pretend to
love a fib
Oh, maybe you didn't mean to
But oh you did
Don't call me
'Cause I'm not ready
Oh, don't bother
I've got others
Lining down the block
You left me
Maybe you didn't mean to
If you did
Now you're free
You don't have to make believe
That you loved me
Author notes
I hate relationships. They never turn out right. They rather turn left. Then south.
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This was great! I agree with the Author's note...
-Krista
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You cant expect any relationship to work out if you hate them..
I tried becoming a Trappist Monk one time after I messed up another relationship but those monks wrote to me and said i was too quiet to become one,they were looking for nuns though,i could put a word in for you..
please forgive me for being so cruel M o Monastery?
rhet
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haha! omg. wow! yea, you do that.
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Bravo
Truth at its best.
Birdie
language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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Good relationships cannot be built on lies. You conveyed a familiar message and you conveyed that message in a manner that was clear and poetic.
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and here are your applause....lol
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wow...that was actually really well done. great rhythm. i dont really relate much to the message, but the sentiment pours out of it. good ending.
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thanks. im still hurting a lot cuz of a jerk named joe. i can't believe i liked him. i feel like a bigger loser than him. im just glad it never got too serious.
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