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Reasons and Hopes

I wonder
if
you think
like I do,
If you stay
online
hoping
we'll talk.
If you go
to dances
because maybe
we'll laugh.
If you take
your time walking
'cause maybe
we'll meet.
There are
reasons,
I'm sure,
why these things
go on,
maybe
just maybe.
our hopes
are the same.

Author notes

wierd mood...

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Comments

  • Himmelkratzer
    February 6, 2009

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    I like it. It's really... I don't know how to say... hopeful sort of and you describe that feeling in a cool way. I like:
    you think
    like I do,
    If you stay
    online
    hoping
    we'll talk.
    Also I like the Ending:
    maybe
    just maybe.
    our hopes
    are the same.
    It's ... a nice way to finish

    xx
    H


  • Young Hawk
    February 5, 2009

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    I love this poem. I just love it. I don't know why, but I love it. Sometimes weird moods are good...