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Fiber Obtic Dreams

Heart beats echoing through key boards.
Smiles plastered across monitors.
Fiber optic dreams.

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  • rhetorica gold member
    February 6, 2009

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    this is so neat,its about computers and meeting people on them,it could also be about how medical science uses fibre optics,it could be about a lot of things,i hope its about what i think its about,but im not telling you what i think its about..its a great haiku,best ive read on here

    all the best..

    smile

    rhet


    • skyviewexpress
      February 6, 2009
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      It's exactly what you think its about that you don't want to tell me what you think it's about. It's not a formal Haiku though, Syllables were disregarded. Thank you for the comment

      -Kitten