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Just Me

I'm smart
But I don't know anything

I'm a singer
That can't sing

I'm a writer
That can barely hold a pencil

I'm a social retard
With lots of friends

I'm sweet
But cruel

I'm known by everyone
But no one knows me

I'm a deep dreamer
That's realistic

I'm a loser
But also a winner

I'm afraid
But confidant

I'm understandable
But totally cryptic

I'm what you see
But so much more

I'm alot of things
But still JUST ME

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  • Marie Maundrel
    March 31, 2009

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    Nicely done.I liked it's form and the idea behind.I like your sheep too


  • IceIceBaby
    March 6, 2009

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    Good, very good

    hmmm
    made me think
    because i know you, I question it a bit
    But not much
    Sweet but cruel
    Yes
    I do like it
    I like the form and flow and idea a lot
    nice job, girl

  • Brian Balzer Greeters member
    February 14, 2009

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    Well done.

    You've done a good job of showing that you are indeed a living contradiction. I like this one. No matter what we are we are still who we are. That is something that many people just don't understand.


    • Sarah Under Water
      February 18, 2009
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      Thank You

      I'm glad you liked it! I'm glad that you saw past the simple contradiction, to my point that we are who we are. Truth be told, this is exactly like me, everything about me is contradictory, but that is what makes me, me.

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