Nothing silently
Shadows dawn
Whispers echoing
Fading on
Nothing gently
Awakens night
Colder breeze
Dispelling light
Everything cries
Inside me
Eventually dies
In the nothing…
c2009 vduna
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Short and to the point the ending was powerful loved it.
~Erika~
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As usual a very deep and thought stirring poem Vic, sharing the aches and darkness of awaken nights, of brooding thoughts that turn around and the hope seeming to be in far distance.
Infact I admire poetry of such clear language and emotional expression. Truly written with your heart blood. Thank you!
Ursula xx
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