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Nothing

Nothing silently
Shadows dawn
Whispers echoing
Fading on

Nothing gently
Awakens night
Colder breeze
Dispelling light


Everything cries
Inside me
Eventually dies
In the nothing…

c2009 vduna

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  • flaquita silver member
    July 17, 2009
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    Short and to the point the ending was powerful loved it.
    ~Erika~


  • purple esprit silver member
    February 10, 2009
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    As usual a very deep and thought stirring poem Vic, sharing the aches and darkness of awaken nights, of brooding thoughts that turn around and the hope seeming to be in far distance.
    Infact I admire poetry of such clear language and emotional expression. Truly written with your heart blood. Thank you!
    Ursula xx