i hoped you knew
what you
got into
not a right v. right
like in class
but a
wrong v. wrong
and the worst
is
i helped you
i thought
there was a right
a way
to delay
to hold on
to what
we had
but no
it failed
we underestimated
and you're
paying the price
Author notes
not in the mood for grammar...
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alot of emotion in this poem i like it.
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thanks
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At first I thought the way you broke up your lines, was strange, but I like it now. It kind of shows anger when the phrases are broken up. This is nice.
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At first I thought the way you broke up your lines, was strange, but I like it now. It kind of shows anger when the phrases are broken up. This is nice.
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I like it a lot. Especially the ending. I actually really really like the ending. And the beggining.
i hoped you knew
what you
got into...
we underestimated
and you're
paying the price
Love it.
xx
H
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