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Mia and Mummy and Me

little Mia was crying
as she ran home to me
Naturally I was concerned
then she explained..

He didn`t like me
because I liked him

I tried to make him like me
by helping him
when he needed my help
which was nearly every day

Mummy said I was skinny
so I stopped giving him
my lunch money

He pulled my hair
when I told him
about
that

He punched me
in the stomach
as well

I was crying
but he laughed at me

Then I fell down
in the muck
and look

See!!!

It`s ruined

My new blue dress
I`ts ruined

I comforted her
then Mummy came back
and was naturally concerned
so I explained

Mia is very upset
because a boy at school
said she was skinny
and she is NOT skinny

Yes,I am NOT SKINNY mummy
and tomorrow
I am going to kick that boy
right in the BALLS,
just like Mikey told me

There`s no end
for this poem








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  • Trying to stop time
    March 4, 2009

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    =] =D haha

    This is soo cute!
    And true true Twila its beyond a perfect way to make a guy to fall on his knees right before you! I love this! its soo cute!!

    Favorite line:
    He didn`t like me
    because I liked him


    • rhetorica gold member
      March 4, 2009
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      those are my fav lines too,i think its just like what a kid would say..kids are amazing,they tell the truth,i`ve written lots of poems very loosely based on my 9 year old nephews conversations..he can be a right pain too though like most kids.
      thanks for commenting,

      see you soon whynotlovepoetry

      rhet


  • Twila-
    March 4, 2009

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    haahahaah

    LOL...
    My solution for every bully that comes along in my life...
    is to kick them right in the balls just like this girl. It's a great way to make a man fall to his knees for you.

    Yey.

    Twila**


    • rhetorica gold member
      March 4, 2009
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      hi Twila,thank you for commenting, you`ll never know how men suffer for their testiculars ,it makes childbirth seem like a pinch in the bum....OH oooh!!

      bye

      rhet