I'm mad..
Cutting way to much..
Hurting myself..
And those that actually love me..
If they don't like it all I can say is get the hell away from me!!
They don't know a damn what my life is like..
All the drama..
All the hate..
All the shit I have to go through...
All the people who make fun of me because.. yes..I'm different.
They judge and mistreat..
And point and laugh..
And I gotta say Now for them to get the hell away from me!!
Because if they come close now..
I will hurt them...
I will not be good.
I will not stay away from all the bad things...
Because no-one NO-ONE will get in my way anymore!!
And if people try..
I will not care..
I will just go through life the same way..
Truth be told only few give a shit what I do...
And I don't care anymore...
I'm gonna cry when i get hurt...
Or when I can't stop thinking of all the pain I've gone through recently...
And cut when I want..
So Get the hell away from me if you don't like it!!!
Comments
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Your poem definitely comes across with lots of pain and sadness. I hate that you are going through whatever it is that you are going through. I hate that you hurt yourself for relief to the pain you are feeling. Your poem invites lots of emotion to the reader. I can tell you spoke from your heart. There's nothing wrong with being different. We would all be boring if we were all the same. I like "different." I would probably like you if I knew you just because you are different. I don't like the predictable and you most certainly must not be that. All of this I got from reading your poem. What does that tell you? Pretty good poem, huh? Yeah, pretty good. Can't wait to read what you write next.
Birdie
language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 3.
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you have some very strong & hurt feelings which are displayed in this poem, you have brought them out in a very deep & meaningful way. A good poem that has expressed what u are feeling & going through.
I am sorry to hear that you are not happy and going through some upsetting things, that is one thing we have in common. although i am happy most of the time now, you sound like me when i was your age.
when things do go wrong though i deal with then by self harming and fron what i understand from your poem you do it too.
i feel i am getting through that part of my life, it has taken along time but i really think i am getting somewhere now
if u need to talk to someone about it let me know.
stay strong hun x
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i feeel it
i feel you in this poem bec ause im diffrent too.
i feel like i have to change for the ppl around me becuz thats the only way they'll aprreciate the soul in
me i know now that changing for someone to appreaciate me is not an option
wel thnx for the visual and the feelings
this was deep great job
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