I guess
I'm all
mixed up
messed up.
Before
we'd moved on,
You hadn't
said sorry,
But I'd said
it was fine.
I haven't talked
to you yet,
save one
obnoxious email
you sent me
thinking
that I didn't
know.
And still
you don't know
that I know
But I do.
And you
better have
the best excuse
ever
'cause still
that's barely
enough
for
our friendship.
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Really good. But you need to switch some words around.
"And still, you have no idea that I know." "Better have the best excuse ever, but still that's barely enough for our friendship."
Tell the person to say sorry!! If they don't, they're a butthead. Peace out. -
I love it. It's nice how it's almost cryptic sorof, and can be used for any situation like this. I don't know exactly what to say, but I really really like it.
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Thank you
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I love this poem. I feel like this sometimes, really frustrated. This time, I really like the way you spaced your lines. They're perfect for what you have to say. I definitely love the ending.
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Thanks Hawk
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