i don't know how this
got all all twisted around
into how it is now
how i trusted you
how i should still
but then
you
should have done
not done
a lot of things
some of them
you did
some maybe you did
maybe if you hadn't
i would
right now, right here
trust you
Author notes
I'm either making a statement about how dizzy I am by not capatilizing and using grammer or I'm just too lazy.
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It needs something else. It's a bit confusing, and needs some more order. I'd consider maybe switching a few words around, and adding a final stanza.
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I don't know why but I like it a lot. Nice.
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