Every day,
now and then,
it seems that i'm losing my friends.
Every time
i turn around,
they seem to ignore me
and
leave me
alone.
Do they even know me?
Do they even know that
they're killing me?
What happened to all what
had happened,
to us?
Together?
I always go to
websites that i can
be able to talk to someone, but
i guess it's still the same.
As time passes,
this little heart of mine
cracks, hardly.
In my mind,
i have this picture
of me,
looking at my friends.
Confessions and good-byes
appear.
"Good-bye" i say.
And i walk away with
little tears
coming out.
My heart hurts.
No medicine helps.
I guess that's life,
for now.
Author notes
This is personal and i don't mind sharing personal things. This is happening in true life today and now. Ya i get a little depress. But what can i do? I try and try to fix this problem. But nothing helps. I guess that's it. But i'll keep trying though. No need to say Awwww or Sorry or sumthing. Lolz...XD
Any comments?=)
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wow. great job. a little self-pitying but its very honest. all i have to say is, pardon my language, but fuck people. dont get worked up over the people who arent worth it.
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i agree baby. hehe
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all i have to say is.
if they do that to you
they aren't true friends
good write
nice puring your emotion into it
i likey
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Very personal
You did a great job on this, and like you said it was personal.
To make it more personal though, maybe you could put in specific
thoughts or events that have happened to you. Make it yours.
I did like the part about finding someone on the internet.
<3
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Very touching poem. I liked it very much. I especially liked the way you use spacing between the lines in your poems. Good write!
Birdie
language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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Wow. Sheena this is really good. I loved it. I thought the ending was very thoughtful and, a type of forshadowing. Ok maybe not forshadowing. But anyways great job!!
-Hope.
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