Even though
dreams are dreams,
they can can't be
just dreams!
I know i'm always
hopeful and cheerful
and
i know someone
will break that.
I can get sad like
everyone.
But i get over it like
how the stars tonight take
me for a ride.
Up here, i'm with
you all.
This is so fun!
I see down there:
people cry,
die,
dance,
celebrate birthday,
get dump,
sing,
everything!
It's so bright tonight.
I wish this night
won't end.
I'll see you all
again, like my
dream came to reality,
tonight!
Author notes
This is from a song that i listened. I mean i listened to a song and i got this thing. The poem very much is like the music video. Here's the link to the song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWw0q9FhgH0&feature=related
hope u like it! =D
Any comments?=)
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You write very well, Bigcoolyo. I want to read more of your poems. The spacing gives it a nice touch. You convey alot of feeling in your poems. Keep up the good work.
Birdie
language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 3.
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