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Kid Zzzz

The damp strip confirmed it
She was with baby,
our baby,
my child

It affected her to crazy
as she shot pill after pill
through the grip of my only child

"I`M A DEAD AGAIN PAGAN
HELL FUCK ME!!"

I reached her
as I stretched out
on a pool of her embryonic blood

"FUCK IT FUCK IT,
THE LITTLE CUNT IS COMING OUT!!"

It was her fix
as life entered life
in a state of death

She was with peace
lying there waiting to kill
but I ruined it for her
as I breathed her back
but our child,
my dear child........










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  • flaquita silver member
    July 11, 2009

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    Tears pur down my face i lost a child to but i would of exchange my life fir hers our babys are together in heaven threw then rhet you and me are united our angles with the purest white wings RIP our babies
    ~Erika~


  • Windhover gold member
    February 16, 2009

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    Disturbing.

    Hey R. I hope this is not a cathartic piece and then again in some ways I hope it is because that could be its only justification. Very disturbing stuff. My sincere sympathies. >W<


    • rhetorica gold member
      February 16, 2009
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      Hey Wind,indeed..I wouldn`t dare mess about with a poem like this if it wasnt the truth,Thanks for saying those things



      Terry