Women
many of them
flattered
centered
ambitious
happy
at the top
cinic
women
lonely
lost
used
injured
stolen
sad
in dispair
in pain
in shame
in sorrow
Women
makes you sick
women
makes you wonder
women
in weekness
eated by wolves
women in
abandonment
pain
if you are not
what you ve been expected to be
you lle be surprised what they
will survive
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Nice
I hate how different countries treat women as if we don't populate the whole fucking world gosh!! If thats not enugh apparently we aren't worthy enough still after having the children of some of these basterds we call men. Anyhoo good poem, I really enjoyed it.
Power to the pen,
-Jas.
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Thanks for your comment.
I really know and felt whats to be trated as woman, and poor woman, and fat poor woman.....you know there are men and woman who will treat you as an animal instead...
and this is geting worst day by day.
What shockes me more its to see people who try to justificate any kind of male violence against woman..from words to actions...
What shocked me more are woman who havent enough respect to other woman.
I hate when woman are cinical about woman.Trying to destroy someones image...or selfsteem.
Regards........Ludmila
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Grammar needs to be sorted out here, last stanza fist line for example as well as 'eated by wolves' making no sense at all. But the missuse of women is heart breaking, Martin Luther King once said "We can not even be treated the same in inprinsonment" though he meant this for skin colour it was also true for women.
It could do with work but what you have done is effective.subject: 3, form: 2.
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Welcome to corrections.
Yes I know I have mi mistakes.I am trying to improove this.I am happy if my message its understood.I am pointing to woman who dont really know to have respect to less luckier womans...who can be talented and gifted...only UNLUCKY.I have loved a lot and fighted alot in my life.The only I cant fight its Bad Intentions.I am punished by my family for being selfish...trying to study...acomplish independence...and punished to have some emotional needs for protection and care...Is there any woman who can live unprotected?Must they sacrifice theyr freedom in exchange?People always judge and never ask for the thruth.... Believe me.
THIS IS MY MESSAGE mainly for the woman will never see what men are capable to do when they feel empowered and justified...
Regards Ludmila
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A lot of countries` treatment of women makes me sick, it is evil. I don`t understand how so many men can treat women with little or no respect....freedom and equality is a woman`s right.
I hope I am interpreting this poem correctly.
see you later
rhet
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Women rights...
We have to deal with a lot of limits and judments..and rules whe never script...I think we should keep faithfull to our female iinstinct and look for the path of equilibrium between independence and care.
I like being independent but it seems I lose my fragility because of being capable of not showing it.
WE have many corrections to do and the first its Bed intentioned people on Feminist files who vejate our female condition as much as machists.
Regards from Ludmila----
always strong and week.
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Different States of Women
A nice poem depicting different states of women, but still neglected in different parts of the world.
I pay homage to the deities,
Great, grand and reverened
Who pass away unknown,
Leaving behind their fragrance,
And fruit of struggle to the posterity.
Muhammad Shanazar -
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I apreciate your comment....
I really like to see your comment once again.Reghards from Ludmila607
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i love women, they are amazing. nice poem
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