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Time

Times of happy,
Times of sad,
Times of loving,
Times of mad.
Times of hitting,
Times of pain,
Times of leaving,
Times of shame.
Times of fortune,
Times of fame,
Times of dishes,
Times of lame.
Times of moving,
Times of ill,
Times of having friends at will.
Times with blades,
Times with heart,
Times of eating strawberry tarts.
Times of glee,
Times of joy,

Times of happiness with a boy
Times of learning,
Times of fun,
Times of pleasantness and times when you don't have to run.
Times where books can be your greatest ally,
Times where time is never tallyed.
Times at night to sit and cry,
Times at night to sing a children's lullaby.
Times when to laugh,
Times when to hit,
Times when to throw a fit.
Times of love and fantasy,
Times of hope that may forever be.
Times when life can see mean,
Times of hatred when you need to lean.
Time is of the esscence don't waste it.

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  • Hayley Taschle
    February 19, 2009
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    I rhink rhis is really sweet and I really like the rhyme and all the word choices.
    -HT


  • Birdie Stringfellow
    February 18, 2009
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    I like the last sentence of your poem especially. Sums up the whole message. Good job.
    Birdie

    language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 3, form: 4.


  • zakatak25
    February 17, 2009
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    its good, but fix the kilt part...