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I smiled today...

I smiled today..wow what a shock.
I smiled today it hurt an awful lot.
It was different..
I'm not used to smiling,
Mostly just frowning and crying.
Hurt and mostly always angry is my life,
Sometimes lately with a knife.
Been hurt quite alot these past few Weeks,
Boyfriends and girlfriends,
And horrrible freaks.
Anger takes me over,
Not friendly lately and its time I recovered.
And to think it all started with a smile...

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  • X-haydenx-xnochio-X
    February 18, 2009

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    :) for your smile

    i like the automatic flow to your oeam, how it's not stressed any hwere certain and how it's alomst like a dr.seuss poem...with "Boyfriends and girlfriends,
    And horrrible freaks."

    i like thhe way this has been writen and what was written about in it.


  • deadmanrose3
    February 18, 2009

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    nice

    i like this. Its message is more known to you then anyone i assume but its ryming is great and i can relate to it. Its really good all over.


    • super ray ray
      February 18, 2009
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      thanks.Yeah mostly me..but some friends who read this will know what im talkingg about.