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Business Trip

I`m out playin` on this city
that`s full of Eastern disease
where the bling dogs are dealin`
in smack and teenage crack
along a rusty river of shit
There`s this den of iniquity
where I`m sittin` drinking
and eyein` a naked dancer
who`s poppin` ping pong balls
and blunt razor blades
from her clean shaven slice
of pink ching ching
I show her a flash of Jacksons head
and her tail is on my lap
earning a twenty for her purrs
and soon the cat
will get my cream...
When a rat`s away
a rat will play


















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  • Truthful Sinner
    February 20, 2009
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    pretty explicit but i can say it is put together well, kudos haha


    • rhetorica gold member
      February 20, 2009
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      hi truthful,
      thanks for your comment and the kudos,i like writing in first person narrative so this is not a personal experience,its based on what i know and what ive seen in some cities in the far east

      see you soon

      rhet