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Commands

Believe what they say.
Follow their way.
(please..whatever)
Go to bed early,
Don't eat alot of fries that are curly.
(shit)
Don't have a boyfriend,
Be a better friend.
(stop telling me)
Be happy,
Love your pappy.
(no way jose)
Make new friends even though they are all prissy,
Try to be one big fat sissy.
(no)
Love me love yourself too,
Stop it right this minute!!
Go put on your shoes.
(don't tell me what to do!)
Read books only with love,
Love heaven up above.
(no)
Believe in this,Don't do that,
Become just like me even thouugh I'm fat.
(dont think so)
Stasy always in a good mood when your holding the baby,
Shit She means it she doesn't mean maybe.
(really)
Commands are bothersome.

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Comments


  • Dr. POGO
    February 26, 2009
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    I like this. Mainly because it’s true in pretty much all cases of depression in children. And not many write on it. They just repeat that their life sucks as many times as they can. And most of the time, they simply
    jump to conclusions (suicide)without even hinting the complications. But you wrote the exact problems. Great work!