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Kayley, the girl I adore

This girl I adore,
She makes my heart soar,
Through the good times and the bad.
Whenever I am angry or sad.
She is there to make hear.
Her words I hold so dear.
Through the dark times of pain and death.
She is there to give her best.
Pain surrounds my life at all times
Her voice always echoes in my head like a musical chime.
Kayley she is the girl I will always adore.
Talking to her i will never bore.
Kaley she is the girl i will always love.
For answers about the future i will look above.

Author notes

My feelings for her arent the same anymore but we will always be friends im sure of that she is one of those few people that i know will remain close to me.

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  • Hanah gold member
    April 1, 2009

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    I like this one.Flows well and it's really sweet.I'm really happy things are going well for you my friend.It's nice from you to dedicate this poem to a friend.


  • NoblePoetry silver member
    March 25, 2009

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    true love

    how sweet send her flowers ok. Your poetry is getting alot better. Very artistic and well in verse and phrase.

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.


  • shadowinthecorner
    March 14, 2009
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    aww that was very sweet


  • Himeko love Chikane
    February 19, 2009
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    I love this poem ^^ You make me so happy!!


  • super ray ray
    February 19, 2009

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    wow..love the feeling..is it returned though?
    Love is a ..well loves difficult.
    Anyhow love your poem.

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