The ivy green eyes
which dance with joy
amidst the golden rain
The sun casts a gentle glance
to the Western sky
enveloping the land with warmth
Softly
the trees sway
color of rich complexity
Slowly
the birds will chirp
and the awakening of day
is marked
while time passes
The earth becomes a lively flourish of life
no place is still
and the sun shines with confidence
The sun fades once more
its vigorous light
surrenders to the shadows
now a dying ember
Skies are dark again
the moon takes its kingdom of night
as stars reappear from a day of hiding
the wolves peer out from their amber eyes
life's song has not abated
A new day comes upon the earth once more
and the sun will light the land anew.
Sunrise,
sunset.
Author notes
I was feeling in a nature mood today.
How can I improve this?
Comments
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Nice imagery! I especially like the opening lines. Also
Skies are dark again
the moon takes its kingdom of night
as stars reappear from a day of hiding
the wolves peer out from their amber eyes
life's song has not abated
You are a talented writer.
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Amazing
I really enjoyed this AC Poetry thanks for writing it
What really caught my eye was the wonderful natural imagery and essence that appears in this write thank you so much!
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"The sun fades once more
it's vigorous light
surrenders to the shadows
now a dying ember
Skies are dark again
the moon takes its kingdom of night
as stars reappear from a day of hiding
the wolves peer out from their amber eyes
life's song has not abated
A new day comes upon the earth once more
and the sun will light the land anew"
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