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Twas the final round
The shiny white teeth of the contestants Tripping over weasel words As tongues danced with promises Of a better tomorrow But, seriously What could THEY do? A bouquet for the winner A VIP pass for the loser A new standard for the art And everybody wins Contestant one is young, He's also black Got some sorta charm to him Contestant two is pale and old A bitch VP nobody likes I don't think he's got his priorities straight Hell, the Pageant is over Mr. Obama takes the lead by Quite a landslide It's all whose got the biggest words In this national popularity contest |
Author notes
I wasn't going to originally release this because I didn't like it. When I found "sharepoetry", with the proclamation of a far more critical environment than that group of cliques and "incestuous family poem breeders" over at AllPoetry, I decided why not give it a chance to, y'know, get some helpful criticism to turn this piece of shit better.
I make it a point that, because this site is about critique, I will partake in critiquing any poets who at least leave a semi-helpful comment on this and anything else I post.
