Etna visited for instant coffee
She brought rock cakes
and spluttered incessantly
about the time we spewed
on each others faces
when we were one year old
At one stage i`m sure
she thought I was like her
such was the velocity
of her eruptions
but few single men
can discuss babyspew
while there`s a mouthful of passion
foaming and bubbling
from a curvy coffee pot
She became unstoppable
as she showered me
in white hot kisses
from her raging spout
which caused me
to become engulfed
with the burning flames
of her natural beauty
She still comes around
again and again
for coffee and rock cakes
but one day soon
the cakes will be stale,
her kisses cold
and the coffee, frozen
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ENJOYED READING
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS PEICE,I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR THE STORY BEHIND IT,,,,, BUT THAT WOULD AND COULD RUIN IT FOR ME. I HAVE MY OWN THOUGHTS ABOUT WHO AND WHAT IT IS ABOUT. THANKS FOR WRITTING IT.
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hi jhage, thank you for commenting, Etna is a huge volcano in Italy thats been almost constantly active for 500,000 years, the "I" in the poem is a dormant volcano that gets in the path of Etnas eruption, the ending signifies the start of the next ice age..thats all i will say about it,thanks again
see you later
rhet
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