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Little Tiny Pieces.

Heart bleeding,
Totally shredded.
My heart is falling apart,
Piece,
By piece.
"We need a break"
Is all you said.
But it still destroyed
My broken heart.
There I go,
Sinking
Deeper,
And deeper
Into this endless depression.
Falling,
Slipping,
However you may put it,
You already know
You destroyed my heart,
And all that is left,
Are Little Tiny Pieces.

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  • socialmisfit
    March 23, 2009
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    Can sooooooo relate. Hit's the nail right on the head.


  • Brokencyde4585
    March 20, 2009

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    I like how you can use just one word but by the flow of your work it says a million.. great job.
    -brokencyde-


  • Soulless.
    March 17, 2009

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    Romantic to the point of a heart break. Most definitely I can compare to this poetry you have posted. Wonderful accomplishment with the flow! =


  • Truthful Sinner
    March 17, 2009

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    Shit i really know wut this feels like i think most people do, great emotion in it keep up the good work.