Exploding,
Get out of my face,
Unless you wanna get hurt.
Already threatened
Someone I know.
Please stop me
Before I hurt someone.
And I don't want that.
Can't control my actions,
Please stop me,
Help me control myself.
I need you so badly,
Help me please.
Before I go,
And leave,
You must save me
From these dreaded dreams,
Just help me,
Control Myself.
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Join the club! It is a thing I deal with too. It is something that I would hire someone else to alleviate. But its a personal battle.
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Loved it.. I am like speechless... This was like so much anger but yet like emotional.. I loved this.
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Short but powerful we all fight with our emotions some keep it under controle better than others well done.
~ERIKA~
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Well Done
This poem shows the emotions we all feel. And the fear which frights us. Good flow a very fine piece of work. Sweetpea.
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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this was a great poem... i completely know where your coming from. I have been there one to many times... keep it up...
-brokencyde-
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Lots of people can relate to this poem. That's one of the reasons it makes it so special. The way you expressed the emotions are genuine and believable. I can picture this event happening. Very good write.
Birdie
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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I really like this one. I can definetly relate to the emotion, the images, the words. Great write.
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Wow i completely know how u feel, i had really bad anger problems i really messed someone up and i didnt always mean to there was alot of regret in my past
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This poem does a good job of emotional release, and it flowed well. The pain is heartfelt and rings so true.I look foward to reading more of your work.
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