I've always wondered
about people with headphones,
They're like walking around
with adon't talk to me sign
becuase they can't hear you.
They don't want to hear you
But isn't it lonely?
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Okay I need to edit/add to this but this is something that interests me
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I like it. It reminds me maybe of Shel Silverstein. Short, too the point, and really makes a person think.
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Very True
You sometimes wonder what it does to people when they do that, thanks Saturday it gave me something to think about
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I actually like it the way it is. Maybe it's because I'm slightly partial to short poems, or because the few words just seem to fit (at least the feeling I get from this poem) perfectly. I really like the idea and the "start" (or in my opinion, the poem...)
Nice!
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Ya I actually think I kindof like it this way...
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Hmm....It's a very good start. I'd like to see what this would look like if you elaborated on it. Interesting idea...
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thanks Hawk
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