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Uncondition (unedited)

Unconditional
is no matter what
I don't care
It's irrevelent
to me
Whatever, whenever
it'll always be fine
Forever and ever,
which is a very long tome,
I'll be here
We once agreed
that being old
living to a hundred
is pointless
because not everyone can
maybe I can
maybe you can't
and what's living
without you?
So it dosen't
even matter
if we stop
being friends
Because this
is not stopping.
This is unconditional.

Author notes

This ones kinda tired...
My computer had a freak out and somehow when i was editing it turned into two seperate poems, this is the original

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Comments

  • Himmelkratzer
    February 23, 2009
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    You're on a roll!! This is interesting, in a good way. I really like
    We once agreed
    that being old
    living to a hundred
    is pointless
    because not everyone can
    maybe I can
    maybe you can't
    and what's living
    without you?
    It's good, almost like a rant. Well done!
    Himmel