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Breathe Me {Behind.Blue.Eyes}

I'll bleed it out to let you know,
this is the very end.
And you can break the very heart
that never would bend.
And know that inside that pulsing heart,
something lies within.
A piece of you that just today
has shriveled to an end.

A stinging song of yesterday
that cuts me to the core,
Came to me, sadly beating down
my fragile broken door.
And with a gust of open wind,
it lies within my soul,
I found a piece of you in me,
that fell into the blackest hole.

And with a sigh, a dying life,
wrapped into an ending flame,
Set forth to be the very end,
of neverending shame.
And with one sweep of decreasing breeze,
I found this new solution.
And with one gasp of dying breath,
I start a revolution.

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  • xXxPsycho KillerxXx
    March 8, 2009

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    Heart Breaking

    This Is An Amazing Poem. It Has Such Emotion Lying In Every Word. I Feel I Could Relate To This, In One Way Or Another.


  • -CrimsonTears-
    February 26, 2009

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    i love the first stanza. you did a real great job with this. great job you deserve 3 clappies..... yay