"I love you.
please wait for
me."
The wind passes through me,
like wishing me good luck,
keeps me going.
Your voice,
so gentle yet so mysterious,
that I fear for somewhat.
Even though it was only a
minute,...
"Wait for me."
Your eyes.
Your dazzling
eyes that
always, always
hypnotize me.
I don't know
but
these feet of mine keep
on looking for
your voice.
The road which stretches so
endlessly, seems to keep on going
forever.
Please wait
for me.
"I love ..."
"please wait."
Author notes
The picture of this poem is that a girl and a boy went out for a date. But the boy doesn't like the girl. Even though a lot of people/friends say that the boy doesn't like her, she still keeps on going. The scene of the poem is that the boy walks away from the girl. And the girl kept running and running for him. Unfinished love story as it is. Love can really make you blind. How stupid....lolz...XD And i also got it from a japanese song. I recommend noone to watch the episodes/shows of it. It pretty seems that it's very very for mature people, like me. I mean, i reccomend it to people who are mature in emotional not physical. Even though it's a great show, not mature people should watch the shows but everyone even not mature people can watch the song. Hope you like the song as much as i like it! X) Kust kidding... Lolzz...XD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gqEja5mMKmY&feature=related
Do u have any unfinished business??? lolz...XD
Comments
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Good poem.... Good story. I see that you like to write poems about japanese songs and stories. Songs are good influences because the writers are poets as well.
You had a few errors.
In the second line, pleace should be please.
in the seventeenth line, You changed tense. It should be hypnotized or hypnotize.
In the twentieth line, keeps should be keep.
Good job. I liked this one. It is my type of poem.
Twila**
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