You left me
when I need you most
my heart is torn in three
one piece is you
another piece is me
the third piece is we
its an ocean now
that swims until its dry
i`m cold and I cry
all night long
on a wet pillow that has
dreams for your love again
You shot a hole in
through my soul
now the bullet
inside the middle of my gullet
burns like toast
when i need you most
why why why?
you left me
cry cry cry?
you left me again
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HAHAHA i almost fell out of my chair laughing
'my heart is torn in three
one piece is you
another piece is me
the third piece is we'
fucking awesome. swagger summed it up best lol.
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hey rhet
the themes within this poem are just awesome. just about bought a tear to my eye. why do you call this, Worst Poem Ever? i think its just great.
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hey dave,thank you so so much...
i cried too when i wrote this,at least you understand it,some people think this is a funny poem but she broke my heart in three pieces
rhet
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hahahaha
funny thing is, if you posted this without the title
someone would think it was serious and comment how great it is
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hahaha
you`re absolutely right,i clicked random and i must`ve read ten poems in a row like this,seriously depressing especially when i realized not all of them were from children
thanks swagger
rhet
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