Hot icy arrows shoot through me
Opening the entrance to
My bare broken heart
In my heart all you see is a
Cold soul with a tainted heart
Intense by the power
Deep thoughts run through my mind
Excitement and fear show within my eyes
As I stare at my arm
Just watching the blood
Scared of what might happen
Unable to remember there face
Intoxicating me with alcohol
Cold chills run down my spine
Into my nerve system
Desolated hands as the blood stop flowing through my veins almost
Ending my life
As my heart beat
Starts to speed up
The doctors try to save my life but
It was too late
My other half
Killed me inside and
I didn't have the will to survive the pain any longer
Author notes
Please tell me what you think it would mean so much to me
thank you for reading
Comments
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This was a good poem. It showed emotion and the imagry was effective. It also flowed well. I look foward to reading more of your work.
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