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~ Beating Love ~

Hey,



as long as



my



my heart-beats



are for-ever beating,



I'll never-


ever


get over you.





Author notes

I think i got this poem from a song called "I'll never get over you" by M.Y.M.P. As you listen to the song, you may realize that my poem is kind of the lyrics. But i didn't copy it. The poem is from my heart/mind and it is not from the song.

The picture of the poem is at a place, at the beach. It's night-time and the moon and star is shining at the ocean-water. And the girl is confeesing her love to a boy. The girl has a strong face and when the boy was shock at what she said at him. But he laughed at her strength or guts. And he said that he loves her too! Isn't puppy-love sooo cute? =3

Where was the place of your fist love?

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