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" 0uR AwESomE LOv3 "

Even though I can't fly
through the sky, I still
try and try
alone.

Your wings will take
me there.

Your smile, so pure,
so bright,
is shining
through my eyes.

So now and now.

Your warmth that
lasts forever will
kill me.

Through the time...
through the time, i will then
explode.

Your words that gently,
truly, creeps through me,
through my mind,


baby I luv U


The morning light gives
my heart a beating sound.
Even though 'it' is,
it was surely mine.

Your gentle hands
will stay here and forever-
more.


Come on now, please kiss
me baby.


You, my baby, will
be my prince for
forever-more.


I luv U babe, so please
kiss me more.


The morning light gives
my heart a beating
sound.
Even though it was,
it is truly yours.



Author notes

First of all, I AM NOT A NAUGHTY GIRL!!!!!!X0

This is more of a lyrics than a poem i would say. I got it from a song AGAIN. Here's the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cqnIRe0O17Q

I recommend you to watch it, so you can understand how the poem goes or flows. If your asking about where i got the naughty-ness of the poem, the answer is I DON'T KNOW!!!
I guess it came out of my head or sumthing. Any ways hope you like it! =3

What's your reaction when you read the 'asking for kiss' parts on the poem?

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