A night with you by LittleCrimsonJester at Share Poetry

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Blossoming rain paints the sky
breeze tickles the skin.
Pulsing life rest beneath me
warmth rises slowly calming.
Together, colors light the curves
serenity graces my heart.

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Zachary Clark
October 10, 2009
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I agree with Krista short but beautifully captivating.
Pretty Little Daisy
July 31, 2009
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short but beautiful! love the metaphors

Krista
flaquita
July 9, 2009
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This was truly beutiful left me with out breath
~Erika~
- LittleCrimsonJester
  July 13, 2009
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  Thank you

by LittleCrimsonJester

On June 30, 2009

© Robyn Bischman, All rights reserved

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