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WHY MUST YOU PLAY THIS GAME I NO LONGER WANT TO BE A PART OF,
YOU LOVE ME ONE DAY AND HATE ME THE NEXT,
DAMN YOUR SO RETARDED,
I FOUND A NEW LOVE AND IM READY TO GET IT STARTED,
ITS GOOD TO KNOW MY LOVE WILL NO LONGER BE TESTED,
JUST POKING ME TO SEE HOW MUCH COULD BE INJECTED,
I PUT A EVICTION NOTICE ON YOUR HEART,
REASON WHY,
CANT TAKE ANYMORE OF YOUR BITCHIN WHERE DO I START,
I LOOK IN THE MIRROR AND SAY IM DONE AND I CAN SMILE,
BECAUSE AFTER ALL THIS BULLSHIT LOVE IVE GROWN TIRED,
ASKING ME WHERE IM AT,
WHO AM I TALKING TO,
IVE SEEN YOU WITH THAT GIRL SO JUST TELL ME THE TRUTH,
SO ILL TELL YOU....

YOU ARE THE BIGGEST BITCH I KNOW,
THE ONLY RESON I STAY WITH YOU IS BECAUSE I HAVE NOWHERE ELSE TO GO,
YEA IT WAS ALL LOVE AT 1ST,
BUT IN THE END I CAN NO LONGER QUENCH MY THIRST,
BUT LET ME HAVE MY TIME TO REJOICE,
I FOUND LOVE THATS NOT A HOAX,
I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW HOW HAPPY I CAN BE,
DEFINITLEY WHEN HER BODY'S ALL OVER ME,
FROM THE WAY SHE SAYS ME NAME,
TO THE WAY SHE CURLS HER FEET,
AND KNOWING THAT SHE LOVES ME FOR ME,
LOVE AINT PERFECT AND THIS I KNOW,
BUT IMMUNE TO YOU,
IV'E GROWN,
SO I GUESS THERES A THANK YOU IN ORDER,
THANK YOU FOR BEING A BITCH AND GIVING MY LOVE AWAY,
BECAUSE I HAVE A PERSON THAT I LOVE AND WILL NEVER REPLACE.

Author notes

YEA I WOULD LIKE TO DEDICATE THIS TO MY LOVE JASPER AND TO MY BITCH OF AN EX WHITNEY .... LOVE YOU JAY... THIS CAME FROM THE HEART I WAS SO CAUGHT UP IN HER BULLSHIT THAT I FORGOT WHAT LOVE WAS

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  • TheJOKERSaid silver member
    July 10, 2009

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    awwww....how cute .....i love readin shit that comes from the heart...that and ya sound like me.. ya write how ya talk it seems so much more real to me so good one kiddo


  • kaety
    July 10, 2009

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    Nice

    good poem. someone broke your poor heart. i am really sorry to hear that about anyone from sharepoetry cuz they are all kind to me. hope your heart feels better!

    Kaety kittie kat


  • Jas.12
    July 2, 2009
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    I love you too

    ..and what a bitch she was babe...


    • Jas.12
      July 19, 2009
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      Actually I take that back

      no she's still a bitch but yu just one 2 lol
      have fun fun fun
      with your bitch bitch bitch! lol