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Thank you (Tribute to one of my friends)



I want to thank my friend so dear

You help me the right path find

That don’t let me loose my mind

That you wiped all my tears


Your nice words make the pain go away

Of gold is your sweet heart

You are intelligent and smart

Oh, what else can I say.


Sister, your place no one above

Thank you for advices

That you are so kind and nice

Thank you for all your love.


Let the right man say “I love you”

When you feel he’s the one

Finish all what you have begun

Let all your dreams come true.

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  • Eli the Happy
    July 3, 2009
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    i love the anti-purism setting this poem has. and you pay tribute to something worthy. i like it